Monday, June 29, 2020


One day I was scrolling through my phone and came across a post about a mysterious box. It said that it was located at a beach around where I live so went to go find it. I walked to the beach and looked around. I looked around where the rocks are and I found it. I walked towards the box. I tried to pick it up but it was too heavy, so I tried to open it. It took a while to open. I looked inside the box to see if there was anything unusual, and then I saw it.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Syifa,
    Well that was a wonderful opening to a fabulous story. I loved the way you used the narrator's voice to drfaw me in and told me a back story. Now I'm desperate to know what happens next; this is the sign of a talented writer. Keep it up.
    Mrs Moore Team 100 WC London